Singing inspector

Good day fellow readers my name is Jesse, last week my friend iris Vaughen and I were in music class when suddenly the door of the class slammed open BANG! I then only realized that to day was inspector day ,the day That everyone feared even the teachers. It was an new inspector this year, and his name was Raymond (it sort of reminds me of a rat which he is) he was wearing huge I could even gigantic knickerbockers paired with thick stockings that were as white as snow! He had a round red face with eyes like blue gooseberries that made you shiver when you saw them he also had hair that was as golden as well I don’t know but it was the most curliest hair I have ever seen. Oh wish I was still a little kid they don’t do music class but there is two older boys ( Jack Long and Paulus) that also don't go to music class. The inspector ( or should I call Raymond the rat) said we must do that doh Ray me fah and tata tete things then he called up Benny and Charles and Mr rat king was pointing at a modelater but I knew that Benny an Charles  could not Sing a single song ,why aren’t you singing! Called Mr.R in a bomming voice Benny said in a guite voice “sir we only know how to sing pretty Polly” well than sing it he shouted they started to sing Benny in a low voice and Charles in a high voice next Mr.rat called me up. I was confident because I was use to singing in front of a big crowd and I sang absolutely brilliant if I do say so my self. Next Mr.rat called up iris Vaughen and gladys Armstrong I felt confident about iris because I knew she sang well but not as good as me but then when they were about to sing nothing I mean nothing came out of there mouth “well well well what do we have here” said Raymond rat “ apparently the deaf and the dumb” then he called up winnie and Gladys long to help iris and the other Gladys  along . by the end of day I told my mom and dad everything  that happened that day and they  just laughed.